Most deep concepts are always best said in few words...you speak
what so many need to hear but afraid to say out loud. Thank you for speaking for them...great poem!

You have said much in very few lines. Well written.

This Is A Very Short Poem Indeed!
And Also Deep-I Love It!!

In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love
Vickie

I love the closing lines especially.

A silence
I wish I could speak into.

So nicely done. Thanks for sharing ;)
((Hugs and LOve)) ~SilentDream

You capture the thoughts, emotions, and desires of many with this short but deep, introspective write. Well Done!

Lena

Introspective and insightful. I like this poem. R

A great poem about longing.

There is such a wide scope for readers to place their own interpretations to your three considerations that I really think the title does not do the poem justice. Yes it is a short poem but the simplicity of the statements may give poeple much pause to consider how they relate to one or more of those statments. Perhaps the poem should be entitled 'I wish I could' or something a little more puilling than the rather pragmatic but unrevealing 'A very short poem'. Love the poem - but please consider changing the title.

Simple and Ingenius, you've brightened my day.

Gorgeous poem!! May wishes come true!!!
Love, Suzie :-D

A very short poem that says a whole lot. Nice!
Chanti

Just perfect! Enjoyed,
Safi

Todd,

Very insightful. Is this part of your book?

Cynthia

I find I can do that by going within. I like this write. It's short and deep.

i really dig this.

this makes sense in the middle of this day. I'd love to show down and address some issues

Great poem.

Sometimes they are all different, and sometimes they are all the same.