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R E D
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a metaphor of the present times...what do you see?


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After he was hit...blood

trickled down his chin from his lip

...sending the crowd into a frenzy

The ripe plump fugi...surrounded

by a large selection of other various fruits

in the bowl on the table

...was the center of attention

She deeply inhaled...holding

the freshly clipped american beauty to her nose

...the scent of which took her

so far away that the thorn embedding

itself into her finger...was never felt

 

 

copyright; AsaDSeeley/2009

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "R E D"
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on October 4, 2014
~Asa
Unique your insight!!

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed on September 15, 2014
Beautifully penned Asa.

Reviewed by Barbara Henry
Reviewed on September 8, 2014
Asa, what a powerful work of art! It evokes a strength that transcends the mundane and transports the reader to a favorite place, far from the "maddening crowd!"

Thanks for sharing,and I know you will continue to have success.

Barbara J. Henry

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 29, 2014
Your verses awaken the imagination and for me, are worthy of much more than a single reading. I love the reference to "American Beauty" which not only reminds me of the rose but also of the movie, which I love. Thank you for sharing, Asa. Love, peace, and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed on August 29, 2014
This is quite an extended metaphor. Imagine Fergerson as a bowl of ripe fruit waiting for the picking.. The last four lines expresses the lack of emotion felt as some lay dying and others feel no pain.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 29, 2014
I see an incident Ferguson and how beauty can be treacherous if one gets too close.

Ron

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on August 29, 2014
The coalescing of varied sensations and emotions conveyed by your word choices lifts this above the ordinate, making even less desirable the mundane and pedestrian trite that often fills posting space. Thank you.

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on August 29, 2014
I think I am seeing a spectrum of opposites. It doesn't strike me as particularly violent. I see emotion, followed by visualisation, then power of pleasure over-riding pain.

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on August 28, 2014
Really? I see myself watching T.V.

Way too much violence U know...


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