OH MY, WHAT A BLESSING, INDEED! WHEN THAT CALM, THAT PEACE...WHICH 'SURPASSES ALL UNDERSTANDING' ROLLS IN AND GIVES US A 'REPRIEVE' FROM THE ANGST OF WORRISOME 'THINGS', AMEN. ENJOYED JANE, THANKS. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATION
You have shared a special moment/experience effectively through your verses, Jane. I got a pang in my heart when I read Carol's comments. Love and best wishes,
Regis
PS: Is it just me or did AD remove the dates of postings? I found them very helpful.
Has a frenetic energy quality to it which juxtaposes the descriptions of calm. Reminds me of a good exercise bout, or when one has done something cathartic, and then, as you so well state, "a calm rolled in tonight." Love this.
Somehow, I just can't equate sweat dripping from my body with calm!
That said, it's an interesting poem, and I like your descriptive words about the calm rolling in.
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
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Regis
PS: Is it just me or did AD remove the dates of postings? I found them very helpful.
That said, it's an interesting poem, and I like your descriptive words about the calm rolling in.
Connie
something that removes storms
from our lives. As long as
this is not the calm before the storm.
Let it be the calm of inner peace
Love and Light
Lily
budd