Tell me some stories and make me believe
Make me stop wearing my heart on my sleeve
Feelings of pain, lonliness, and of hurt
Better I purchase a longer sleeved shirt
Happiness lurks in the cracks in the dark
Once in a while I go search on a lark
One time I caught it but then let it go
Being so young then how was I to know
Older and wiser Ive heard from my friends
I am not sure of how this story ends
Hoping is all that I really can do
Wishing the best for myself and for you
SOMETIMES WE GET A SECOND CHANCE TO RE-DO WHAT WE MESSED UP, SOMETIMES...NOT. BUT SURE, AFTER A HARSH LESSON, HOPEFULLY, WE DO WITH GOD'S HELP, 'RISE'... OLDER AND WISER. GREAT WORK, ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, MY FRIEND. BLESSINGS, LOVE, FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS.
A very encouraging message from someone who has experienced a lot in life. I like the whimsical tone and creative wording like "longer sleeves." And, what a lovely picture!
WELL DONE GAL !
REMINDS ME OF SONG LYRICS OF AN OLD FAVORITE TUNE.
" BUT I WAS OLDER AND WISER THEN, THAN I AM NOW..."
HOPE CAN BE A MICHIEVOUS EVASIVE RASCAL SOMETIMES ...
BUT ALWAYS KNOW THAT IT LURKS NEARBY ALWAYS!
ALSO CONSIDER THAT ... THAT HEART ON THE SLEEVE
CAN SOMETIMES BE LIKE A BADGE OF COURAGE...
AN INDELIBLE BUT INVISIBLE TATTOO...
REMINDING US OF A FORMER ADVENTURE
ONCE ATTEMPTED, AND A MEMORABLE HISTORY
OF LOVE'S FORTUITOUS FOLLY...
This is magnificent, Jane. Perfect rhyming, ultra motivation thoughts, and one hundred percent Jane. One of, if not the, best poem I have ever read of yours.
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WELL DONE GAL !
REMINDS ME OF SONG LYRICS OF AN OLD FAVORITE TUNE.
" BUT I WAS OLDER AND WISER THEN, THAN I AM NOW..."
HOPE CAN BE A MICHIEVOUS EVASIVE RASCAL SOMETIMES ...
BUT ALWAYS KNOW THAT IT LURKS NEARBY ALWAYS!
ALSO CONSIDER THAT ... THAT HEART ON THE SLEEVE
CAN SOMETIMES BE LIKE A BADGE OF COURAGE...
AN INDELIBLE BUT INVISIBLE TATTOO...
REMINDING US OF A FORMER ADVENTURE
ONCE ATTEMPTED, AND A MEMORABLE HISTORY
OF LOVE'S FORTUITOUS FOLLY...
"DUST YOURSELF OFF AND START RIGHT OVER AGAIN!"
PEACE ... Tom ...