“It’s more about
her death than her
life.” That’s a critical
review to remember
when one reads the following.
But a critical observation
is that “Yes, there is a
strident ‘status-quo’ which
casts an unapproving eye on
all artistic offerings. And,
there are spouses who
sometimes don’t treat their
partners as they should.”
Nonetheless, the poet knows
how the common and mundane,
seasoned by the gilded
possibility of poetic inspection,
can become all they ever
possibly may have become
And all components found
within them are game
to a poet’s analysis, that
is, the great ones, such
as you, break down
all tenets of beauty,
ugliness, lacking, excess,
and functionality existent
as verifiable pieces of every
thing real or supposed,
living or inanimate, and,
in one way or another
helpful or detrimental to
mankind, and then present
all truths concerning those
to a public which may or
may not accept them
as actual or sanction
creative explanations, postulations,
and theories about them
Long ago I was warned
several times not to read
what you’d written;
but of course in matters
of word crafting, mere
users of perhaps a somewhat
abstract type of prose/poetry,
owning talents far inferior
to those possessed by the
great masters of artful expression,
really have little to lose
through exposure to what
those masters have written,
except most likely to say
“Gee, I wish
I could write like that.”
“Her tone is too dark” some
said. And others added
that your gifts and abilities
put those of lesser
creative expression to shame
And I won’t lie
and say that when I
encounter your words I
can’t process them
without wishing
your life’s sojourn
might have ended
better for you – and
lasted longer!
And I can’t sanction
the taking of one’s own life
it seems invalid
across the entire
gamut of possible human
characteristics. Beautiful
creators shouldn’t do it,
nor should anyone who
may find him or herself
at any certain troubled point;
but, we grieve its
occurrence, and we’re left to
guess if we shared in its
false justification
Thus, who gives this woman
daily into a union
of past insightful words and
future hopeful illumination?
It must be someone
far less talented who
saw her name and
in response
attempted to rekindle
embers from the torch
that had been her flame
But whether his or her
words found a front or
back page, shouldn’t the
poet have hoped they’d
displayed a helpful communication?
Apparently not always
said social lights, who often
wished to discard or disregard
artful rights, and toss
to oblivion claims
to fame made by
the truly exceptional, though
even they at their end may
have succumbed to weakness
or self-pity.
And I dare not say
for certain, yet am
supposing topics
very varied found their
truth in your presentation,
but only if you first
deemed them worthy
of such exposure
And I believe, it’s
because of your
ability to reconstitute,
or shed in new light
what common eyes see,
that your presence
is still sought so
by those who love you
and your words
Sylvia, you went away
too soon – too soon to learn
of the sixties tragedies, or
the seventies phoniness, or
the eighties ridiculousness, or
the nineties fear of a
new millennium to come
But yours was the ability
to display and explain
morbid and lonely days
such as those on which
a foreboding
of all that lies ahead
is revealed to those
of us who fear
those who invade
our homeland
from our south
And today, why does
the man with pen in hand
say little about your
actual achievements in poetics?
It must be because
he’s woefully lacking
in the gifts you were granted,
and, he fears
he’ll say too much
and jeopardize the aid which,
in times of paranoia he receives
from you and certain others
somewhat like you who,
if in no other respect,
share with you the fact
that they left
their earthly home
far sooner than they should have
But asking you to remove
your head from that oven
would be as futile I suppose,
as would be warning others
of talents similar to, or at
least approaching yours to
be aware of impending gunshots,
airplane crashes, and
drug and/or alcohol overdoses
or over consumptions
And guesses and reportages
of manmade tragedies
are often threadbare,
hanging there in
unenlightened rooms where
great mortals died,
and where great masters of art were perhaps
first attracted to individuals who,
though perhaps creative equals,
proved to be of far less
integrity when it came
to simply loving those
who loved them
In a style and length I am not familiar with, nor with your interest in poetry, I am familiar with your writing and I am glad that you chose to post this poem today.
Ron