Nicely done with a power packed punch done in brevity.

Budd and Ron,
Thanks for your comments!!!
What about this one:
When the way was vague and unclear,
She could not see any life frontier,
But every cloud has a silver lining,
There’s always someone who’s fighting.

Being talented, courageous and brave,
Having no support, but knowing how to behave,
Being aware of difficulties and hard time,
But starting a “fight” to get rid of grime.

She is full of energy and desires
To change the world for better as it requires,
She is like an angel, who is kind and nice,
With great goals which she praises to the skies.

Gives me mixed feelings.

Ron

succint and just the right words to express the emotion
budd