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Ascent of the Prophet to Heaven
by PHILIP DODD → (All Poetry by PHILIP DODD)
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Lines inspired by a Persian painting.

The Ascent of the Prophet to Heaven


Jade mountain, white crested in winter,
Stars, black and red, stabbed the sky,
Punctured the void,
Like diamonds on a playing card.
Not for his body or his pride,
He wound up the mountainside,
To prove, maybe, he had a spirit.
Heard the tick of clockless time.
His feet bled, grew hard.
Looked up, saw the summit waited,
Bare, broken, made vague by mist.
Dice games of gamblers
Behind him, left in a wayside inn,
Further down, the mutter of shepherd men.
Persian painting path he pursued
From when he was eleven,
Glinted gold, silver, red
On a page of verse,
Ascent of the prophet to heaven.
Light, he rode from the summit,
As if on a horse,
Then, winged, he flew, like a bird.
Cheerful ones met him,
Asked if it was worth the effort.
He smiled, nodded,
Said he wanted to turn,
Tell those left behind: It's all true .
They shook their heads, told him,
There's nothing you can do.
When we came up here, they said,
We felt the same as you.
He understood, knew, for a moment,
Everything.
Then, higher up, he followed them.
  

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 Reviews of "Ascent of the Prophet to Heaven"
Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on April 27, 2014
...combination of lyrical eloquence
and mystical depth...well painted
spiritual journey of...the timeless
character of the mystic...reminiscent of
Sufi poetry...Rumi my favorite...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 27, 2014
Would love to see the painting. The poem is a painting in itself.

Let me remind you that you can use a "special paste" in your browser to let the poem come out in the way it originally was written so that it is much easier to read.

Ron

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 27, 2014
though not quite a poem, as far as form, very well written ... i enjoyed the read immensely ...

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on April 27, 2014
the painting seems to be a true marvel, Mr. Dodd. Great lines in this poem. I always admire your work.


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