Which way do I turn?
What do I follow?
At this point in my life
My heart feels hollow
Chasing my dreams
Following false love
Crying and Praying
To the one above
Asking for guide ness
Forgiveness and strive
To keep my hopes
And faith alive.
Linda, thanks for the review of my poem. Confused is amazing. If you read more of my poems, like "Child Abuse" "Mental Abuse" and "A New Day" you will know that God, and Faith has kept me alive. Keep writing, and always know that the people that I met on this site are great. Please keep in touch with me and have a wonderful Holiday, and New Year. God bless Amy Paige
Don't worry, your heart will lead you in the right direction if you let it. Nice write.
Felix
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
LOL. Sure can relate. Well expressed..
Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
A point we've all been at, at some point. Great poem!
Reviewed by Chuckie Finn (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2004
Powerfully emotionally packed piece.
Your words are reveal your inner self choked with confusion which blocks the laughter from your day.
Very cinematic, Linda and well done.
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Hugs and peace. Joyce
Felix
Your words are reveal your inner self choked with confusion which blocks the laughter from your day.
Very cinematic, Linda and well done.
Best Wishes,
Chuckie
i can sense from this poem, your hope and faith is very strong ...
very honest expression and well penned ...