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Just a Thought
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Just a Thought


 

Once in the bath

Twice in the rain

This commuting lark

Will never change

London Bridge or Charing Cross

Doesn’t matter which

I’m totally lost

 

Yesterday a holiday

I had my sanity

Back to routine

Back to insanity

London Bridge or Charing Cross

Don’t matter which

This commuting larks

Given me a nervous twitch

 

Same people, same places

Same look, same faces

Spare a cell for the poor commuter

Straight jacket, purple pills and a new computer

For everything’s computerised

Look at him, he’s got digital eyes

And him, he’s got the Times

A crossword and he gets the signs

No FT, no comment

No train, an advent

 

I’m laughing it off in my padded cell

This commuting lark can go to hell

 

© Andrea Coltman

 

 
 

 


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 Reviews of "Just a Thought"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 13, 2005
You certainly get the emotions and the meaning across in these verses, Andrea. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed on April 5, 2005
Andrea,

Versed, rhymed, and imaged to eye-opening perfection ... sensational!!

Blessings,

Robert

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on April 4, 2005
Sounds like quite an experience
My commute is short and fast, quess I'm lucky
A cute write.


Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2005
Gotta love and hate routine. Sometimes it drives me crazy, others times its comforting. Nicely written.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 4, 2005
I, too, began hating that humdrum boring routine commute - they can truly drive one crazy.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 4, 2005
LOL I used to commute to uptown Manhattan..........
no cells back then or lap tops.........
just fighting for a seat!

good poem Andrea.........and funny!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 4, 2005
You are writing with a new spark Andrea! Superb poem!
Good to see you!;-)Hope and pray all is well!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 4, 2005
I enjoyed the "Underground" train rides...I has such a laff watching everyone...ver amusing!!

Love Tinka


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