I saw her face last night
Carved from shadows that
Danced in a honeysuckle
Breeze, as I stood watching
From my old wooden door.
A playful kind of dance, her
Image affixed within myself
Lending credence to the tired
Motions of an old willow tree
Beneath which I had kissed her
Once.
Just that once, and oh I had been
Young, a clumsy thing that stood
Lost somewhere between fifteen and
Forever as she wrapped her arms
Around my neck to draw me closer.
And what had compelled her so, to
Hold me thus, beneath a moon that
Hid its face behind a blackened veil
Of clouds, even as hers tilted up to
Mine? Her eyes half closed, mouth half
Open.
The smell of her! A scent like no other, it
Spoke of promises whispered in darkened
Rooms and sad goodbyes, of all the things
I would never understand, this clumsy thing
Pulled along the electric current that was she.
When her lips pressed against mine, I spiraled
Out of all existence to a place I would never
Reach again, that nowhere place that spans
The vacuum between fifteen and forever where
Nothing can ever be as it was before and did I tell
You?
I saw her face last night
Carved from shadows that
Danced in a honeysuckle
Breeze, as I stood weeping
From my old wooden door…
END
“Honeysuckle Breeze”
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Reviewed by Rebecca Wiles (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2007
Very beautiful,haunting and soft!! I loved it!
Becca
Bless you, George... I am so right there, having been with my man since we were both 15... seems, actually, though, that we are only starting to grow up around about now - a bit painful since we are now nearly 50! But yep, the remembrances of these halcyon days when the world was young are most gorgeously expressed here. And you're so right: the earth did smell of honeysuckle - all the year round, as far as I recall! :)) So pleased that you are mended; was on the ball when you was real poorly, but have lost ground keepin up with your road to recovery. But you're here now, and that's what matters! Be well, my friend. TY Kate xx
Honey suckle breeze even sounds like the aroma it begets. Your poetry is sublime with an element of nature that bring the memories back. I've enjoyed this one and now I'll read some more of your poetry. I like and admire what I've read so far. You are talented.
Susan
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
Becca
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Love Tinka
Nothing can ever be as it was before
How true, so very often - and you pen it very well, George.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Eileen
Susan