Posted Note (poem) by Tyran Saffold Jr on AuthorsDen

Posted Note
by Tyran Saffold Jr → (All Poetry by Tyran Saffold Jr)
Wednesday, January 13, 2016 Rated "G" by the Author.

Save

Follow Share on Facebook

I wrote this on a posted note because I couldn't find paper
i'd rather be writing with lightning like God bringin life through my wife like Adam being seduced...without the apple... reading stories of slave heroes Sojourner and Nat Turner Being inspired like poetry Losing my life for my seed because dyin for somethin makes life worth living takin a tour of Heaven watchin Pac and Big L play craps with Paul and Peter watchin love meet hate awaiting for the sight of their children�. US i'd rather be... as high as the moon slippin slidin on sunlight fightin for what right like I lived in the 60's... i'd rather be the bullet proof vest that protected Malcolm X livin comfortable with no stress playin chess with God gettin head nods from Jesus when I made a good move... puttin my father in checkmate before he cheats on another mate.. i'd rather be praying like David saving like payless no stress...past the skies flyin away like kanye on my spaceship before I die �

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 17, 2016

I could see you holding your own with this rap. Very creative and inspirational as I read.

Ron

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on January 13, 2016

A fascinating poem, although I'll have to ask the Lord what's going on if it's like this when I get there. Your description is certainly different than what He tells us in the bible.
I just finiished reading "The Resurrection of Nat Turner" a novel. It revealed so much that was new to me. Thank God we are equal...the way He made us. Nat Turner and others like them were wonderful men.

Connie

Reviewed by Tyran Saffold Jr

Thank you Kindly, Jerry

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Very nice work here, Tyran . . .