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The Moment - Part 3
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THE MOMENT Part 3 Almost at once The Moment arrived but was not as I’d pictured or for what I had strived. Its face was mine altered – by time and strange place and it was then that I knew how my life would unlace: "I wanted to spare you wrong place and wrong time so what you had wished for continued sublime. You might never have known now this fear or stark dread if you’d let me pass by and not clasped me instead."

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Reviews of "The Moment - Part 3"

Reviewed by Michael True

Reviewed on July 1, 2014

It does make one wonder just how much control we have, if any, over our own destinies. Nice write! M.True

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com

Reviewed on April 13, 2014

Wonderful existential ending with a bit of surreal imaging.

Reviewed by audrine max

Reviewed on April 9, 2014

if you’d let me pass by
and not clasped me instead." - perfect ending. thanks for sharing..

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 9, 2014

quite a mesmerizing trilogy stretching across the banks of your thoughts and into the river of life flowing through them ...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on April 9, 2014

"Its face was mine altered –

by time and strange place"

It just does not get any better than this. We can run, but we can't . . . you know . . . hide. We can have our fantasies, but reality has a nasty habit of hitting us in the face. There are times when we should dream, but our dreams should never be a substitute of life.

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