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The Dream Me
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
Monday, March 16, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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THE DREAM ME

Not my own – where I’ve legs
in a sneeze of a dress and am
clutching a golden statuette
on some infamous red carpet –

but all those drifting unseen
through the floating minds of others,

appearing to a neighbour as
an Al Capone card-sharp
or elsewhere as the stranger
on board a Greyhound bus.

All I know’s a sudden sapping,
strength draining from my template
as if down some darkened plughole,

limp until my prodigals return
to switch me on again.



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 Reviews of "The Dream Me"
Reviewed on May 3, 2015
Hang in there Kate, you've already won an award from me.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 11, 2015
It's a pleasure to read your works as you are known for your marvelous mind in creating thinkable poetry. Always happy to see you in print.

George

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on April 9, 2015
A wise man once said,

"There's nothing to do that can't be done,
Nothing to win that can't be won,
Nothing to say that hasn't been said,
It's easy to do once you learn how to play the game, It's easy."

Don't know how I missed this metaphorical gem.
Good on ya Katherine.



Walt


Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on March 31, 2015
You know's a lot more than your modesty tells us.
This is a classic and I am glad to have found you again, Kate.
Superb revelation!

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on March 22, 2015
A pleasure to read Kate. We have ups and downs highs and lows so we continue the good fight even in our dreams at night. Carry your torch high my friend for all the world to see you'll carry on and survive. May peace and love be always with you. Jon Michael

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1
Reviewed on March 22, 2015
Very enjoyable read. I suspect everyone had a "dream me." I know my dream me has been playing for a long while, but maybe it is time to turn "reality me" back on....

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on March 21, 2015
Ooo...eerie. It leaves me thinking of Easter a bit, really, recalling that story from the bible where a woman's been bleeding 12 years non-stop, and thinks that if she could just sneak up and touch the hem of Jesus' garment, then she'd be healed. But he feels that sapping of energy leave him at her touch. ...anyways, in spite of the cost to you, this write has got me thinking beautiful things. I'm thinking a massage for you with some energy work mixed in might be just the thing to put things right. --Charlie

Reviewed by CHANTI LACE
Reviewed on March 21, 2015
Wonderful writing always a pleasure to read you...xo

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 20, 2015
Switch On - Spring Awaits!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 18, 2015
we are waiting for the sanctuary within us to put the switch back on and illuminate the garden right under our feet

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on March 17, 2015
Well, here's to hoping those "prodigals" are switching you on. I sent you an email, but I'm not sure if you even read emails - many people consider it 'old-fashioned;' so many nowadays are about 'texting' and Words With Friends (which I *LOVE*, btw) - wasting time on WWF and poetry sites... sure it's a dream, but it's MY dream! ;-) Dreams do come at a steep cost... sometimes. And no, that cost cannot always easily be quantified. I also love "sneeze of a dress;" at least, assuming there's not "snot" involved... LOL. Kate, as always, I love your characterizations and personifications; in just a few lines, you have us all captive to your imagery. And, contrary to Ronald Hull, I watch "Downton Abbey," not the lesser-known distant cousin, "Downtown Abbey." :-)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 17, 2015
Strange that a person from the UK would dream of things (Academy Awards, Al Capone card shark and Greyhound bus) Stateside. While those of us in the States would be dreaming of The Royals and Downtown Abbey.

Your dreams must be powerful to suck the prodigals out of you! ;-)

Ron

PS… Don't sneeze in that dress!

Reviewed on March 16, 2015
Sneeze of a dress , how perfect is that! This is very visual and well written.

Reviewed by Mor Inchrory
Reviewed on March 16, 2015
Well I think it is true to say that, we have all been guilty of prodigal waste at some time or another. Some might suggest wasting money on poetry sites is the ultimate sin, whereas dreams cost nothing.
Yet there again how does one value a dream?

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 16, 2015
I relate to what you express through your verses here, Kate; I have been a bit "on the edge" lately; probably because (at least that is one of my excuses) of a winter that has not been. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on March 16, 2015
Lean and mean, getting to the essence of longing VS acceptance. lIke pins in slowly inserted into our cultural voodoo doll, you've penned an encapsulate of the malaise that is slowly poisoning many--at least that's how it struck me. Well done.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 16, 2015
I can most assuredly see you clutching that statuette, on that red carpet and all. I don't usually get to where I can't write, although I sure as heck get to where I can't write all that well, like my poetry has been lately. Get those prodigals to free you up, and I know you will.


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