How easy it is to fall into a trap of
loneliness, and how difficult to find
your way out. But trust me there is
light and beauty at the end of the
tunnel, just don't block it out.
Gripping write David.
Warm hugs
Elga
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2004
A very sad write.
Though well expressed. I know these feelings all too well.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
This is so true and haunting excellent expression here.
I know this feeling, this happens for so many reasons, mine right now is the loss of my mother. The pain of loniless is deep and very hard to take. Very well expressed.
sometimes being alone is the worst disease of all, and you summed it perfectly in this affecting, hardhitting write! very well done, david! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
"Feelings of passion are still worn on the sleeve,
But loneliness, like a cancer, has overtaken the inner me"
Powerfull moving and meaningful write, David. Love, peace and strength to you. Regis
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
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How easy it is to fall into a trap of
loneliness, and how difficult to find
your way out. But trust me there is
light and beauty at the end of the
tunnel, just don't block it out.
Gripping write David.
Warm hugs
Elga
Though well expressed. I know these feelings all too well.
Nancy
But loneliness, like a cancer, has overtaken the inner me"
Powerfull moving and meaningful write, David. Love, peace and strength to you. Regis