This poem starts off with gentle almost 'impressionist' imagery, a reverie that draws your reader in to the picture, and then you reveal the pain you feel at love lost and we are drawn in emotionally. I felt the tangible pain of this expression but also delighted in the message of hope at the end. A most compelling and beautifully composed poem.
Chanti
What a poignant poem, I feel the the tremendous heartache within these words. You are right, when the rainbow appears, it lights up the sky and your heart, colouring it with beauty and love. Hope your days will be filled with happiness always.
as hard as it is to believe at times, the sun does shine again. this is a very good write about a painful subject but with lovely visuals to lighten the sorrow
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Sylkie
Chanti
What a poignant poem, I feel the the tremendous heartache within these words. You are right, when the rainbow appears, it lights up the sky and your heart, colouring it with beauty and love. Hope your days will be filled with happiness always.
Warm Hugs
Elga