He came to me a song so sweet it echoed through my heart
Brought me peace soft tranquility right from the very start
A lost little girl a shine-less pearl became diamond with a touch
My dreams unfurled within his world fearless with loving him this much
And though it remains a whisper emotion that dances within my being I will never utter an "I love you" until I know he, too, is feeling
And though the words may never pass from these lips to the ear that it longs for it permeates every inch of my soul ends with a smile in the heart that is yours
Perfection with it's clarity and seamless flow, pursuing it's course and sense of direction. You have said so much with such precision - strength and delicacy at the same time. I love this, Ann. But no-one can mistake love's "inner glow" and sometimes the utterance of mere words is superfluous to what is already conveyed by the life and soul that reaches beyond itself to truly touch the object of it's love. I shall keep this and make "Yours" mine! Thank you. Kate x
Felt like this once about saying "I love you" becuase I wanted to make sure of the others feelings. Hard to carry love in your heart so finally I did and thank god I did..
Really liked this and the message it contains
Tommy
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2004
this touched me Ann, and I really liked it delicateness, al
Ann - Thank you for sharing your heart and your art. A lovely poem, full of love.
Anthony
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2004
Such a beautiful and tender scribe from Your magical quill, Poet Ann Piatt!!! Hopefully, You believe in the statement that actions speak louder than words? Yet, I agree Poet, you are right, one needs too know!!! Thank you for sharing this exciting poem. I enjoyed the read.
This is my personal inspirational book of poetry. It contains many poems written for family, friends, and relevant life situations. Hopefully you will find some that will encourage and inpsire you in whatever arena you are found in your circle of l
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
Especially love the last verse.
I know this feeling!;-)
Really liked this and the message it contains
Tommy
Anthony
But to use them at the proper time is divine.. Great poem..
Pleasure expressed in the desire to please as this poem has plainly expressed, hopefully goes both ways to survive.
A true poetic grandiose. Thank You.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavii