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Because the Bottle Said
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"Let me think: was I the same when I got up this morning? I almost think I can remember feeling a little different. But if I'm not the same, the next question is, Who in the world am I? Ah, THAT'S the great puzzle!'"

-- Alice



At the bottom of the bottle
she swigs the last of yesterday,
and wonders how the hell she got here


Little tin men march
through the battleground
of broken-heart,
weapons of choice:
deception and hurt


Like a curse
she can't wash down
with whiskey on the rocks


Sound of Taps once again
three shots fired
love is dead,
ending of choice:
desertion and OFF WITH HER HEAD


While she wonders how the hell she got here
at the bottom of a bottle and disbelief,
knowing all too well...


She sure as shit ain't Alice

and this ain't no f***ing Wonderland


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


(as a sidenote, Abe Rossi "Abel" has posted a phenomenal piece which is a wonderful counterpart to this one.  If interested in checking it out, the url is http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewPoetry.asp?AuthorID=18479 )



  


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 Reviews of "Because the Bottle Said"
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
Ann,

Sad and powerfully written.

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2004
HA!

great shit!

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2004
Powerful words here. I read this more than once. Original piece and so well done.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 31, 2004
i like the similitude of using alice & the wonderland and the anger and frustration utilized in the end ...

Reviewed on October 30, 2004
WOW Ann, You blasted your point with fire in this one. WTG

Reviewed by Abe Rossi (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2004
This is great Ann....loved it from the moment i read it....the whole take and idea on the alice theme is perfect...keep penning...so i can keep reading...you are truly a talent....Peace Abel

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 30, 2004
Just love the ending Ann...made me chuckle!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ann Piatt
Reviewed on October 30, 2004
Quote: Lewis Carroll/Alice in Wonderland

Picture: www.antelope-ebooks.com/childrens/CHILD/AW/AW01.HTM


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