Intimate moments with a special person.
When I think of my intimate moments of life,
The peace and contentment and absence of strife
There was more that one lady I shared them with
Those moments of passion and moments of bliss.
As I try to recall all those moments gone by
All those earlier moments how hard I must try
To remember them and what they did mean.
It is even harder to remember the scene.
As I struggle and struggle and try to recall,
I soon come to realize they were not intimate at all.
To be intimate is more than just biological drive
It is two people who to understand each other do strive.
From the very first night with my fine lady I sat
We just sat and talked of this and of that.
We became friends, then buddies before anything else
And the welfare of the other was the same as of self.
To this very day we can still sit and talk
But best of all is to talk as we walk
Round the streets of our neighborhood just before dusk.
Those walks are so peaceful, so quiet and so hushed.
As we walk hand in hand or with our arms round each other
If anyone is watching we do not even bother.
As we walk and we talk we are only aware
Of each other and if others are watching just let them stare.
They will soon realize those old fuddy-duddies at dusk
Are so much in love, they talk, as all true lovers must.
We are halves of each other and when we come together
We must talk to each other so the other knows whether
Our love was still strong as we went through our day
And just what has happened while each half was away.
To others I say when you go home tonight
Don’t turn on the TV just turn on the light,
And sit there and talk to the one you love best.
That intimacy alone will take care of the rest.
I will miss my great love if she is first to go
And the other way round it still will be so.
I will look down from above as she goes through her life
To still love and protect her, that love of my life
A poem by P.J. McCormick
Copyright Mar 9, 2005
All Rights Reserved
This is romantic poetry at its best and I commend you. I do hope you gave your love a copy of this beautiful poem.
My warmest regards,
CJ
This is splendid poetry, which goes beyond the mundane...and into the realm of being connected spiritually. Having this depth of appreciation, for this kind of love which you share, guarantees its continuance.
God bless you both.
Rhonda
I'm elated when I find yet another Twin Flame couple reconnected..expand the light you are and touch many lives..none will be the same because of the you and your Beloved..bravo!!
A beautiful piece..love it!
This is going into my library.
Vesna:)
So beautiful!! Perfect expression of love! True soulmateship there!!
Congratulations on finding the one who completes you!
A fabulous joyful write and journey!!
Love and friendship Suzie :-D
(saving to library)
Yes, indeed - a very exacting, beautiful, emotive, and lovely poetic write ... wonderful!!
Best to you,
Robert
Steph
Micke Jinks
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."
what a wonderful tribute to the one you love
enjoyed
Exquisite, tender expression of love...BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
This touched me so much I was moved to tears. What a beautiful romantic poem written from the very depths of your heart. This is the kind of love I aspire to. Many blessings to you...
Chanti
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
wonderful poem.........and its a keeper!
pax A
This is so soft, so romantic, so strong, so peaceful, a loud strong message of true love and all that it is. So beautiful it brings tears to my eyes. Just sways gracefully into my heart. Your heart beating peacfully as is your mind, and now mine.
I could go on and on here.
Beautiful and Strong.
Thank You Pat for showing me and teaching me when true love comes along, I now will know.
Thank You
Love Tracey xoox