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Genuflection
by Diana J Legun → (All Poetry by Diana J Legun)
Friday, March 22, 2024    Rated "G" by the Author.
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What we see in a face may be a mirage.


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Genuflection

Some crawl inside the cross
or stretch themselves 
arms to arms and hands and feet.

Some fold themselves
immersed in cloth, the weave
of blessed and blessing such —

Then walk with pseudo piety — 
the sacrament of sacrifice,
the wine of kind and bread
but stain and crumbs —

—       and naught of love
within their heads.

3/22/24 by djl

 


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 Reviews of "Genuflection"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 6, 2024
You provide much to reflect upon with these verses, Diana. Love, peace, and blessings to you,

Regis. 🙏🌸

Reviewed on March 24, 2024
All of your words ring with truth, Diana. Write on!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 23, 2024
a tight weave or words whose message resounds as echoes across the night. So well done, insight and wisdom amid the layers.

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on March 22, 2024
Thank you, Richard, for your response. I value what you have said and respect your points to ponder. The word ‘Some’ has great weight in this writing, with the concept of ‘And Others,’ in their conscientious integrity, being my next post. I look forward to writing it. ~~ djl

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on March 22, 2024
Such a truthful resonance has this group of sentences that poetically asks us to read, think and feel beyond what might be our first instinct to read and move on. This, however, like most of your postings are deserving of 2nd and 3rd readings, as you inevitably layer your work with multiple meanings. In the case of "Genuflecting," how many such persons do we know, do we respond to, or risk calling them for what they are? Another gem of thought channeled through that needle of your mind, where threading seems so natural and the resultant tapestry of lexiconic erudition is such a reward. Kudos once again.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 22, 2024
Seems you are targeting Christians. I believe real love is unconditional. It is neither aroused nor diminished by another's opinions, value, behavior, or qualities. It is a spontaneous gift that seeks nothing in return. It's difficult, and perhaps for some an idealism, and perhaps for others impossible, but (in context to the spirit of this piece) perhaps one should learn the song of another's heart, and then sing it back to them when they have misplaced it, or forgotten it. Thanks for sharing. r


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