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Danse Macabre
by Candida L Eittreim → (All Poetry by Candida L Eittreim)
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Sometimes we think something is so real we can almost.. but not quite touch it.



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In adamantine halls of brittle glass,

you led me in a danse macabre

<I thought it a waltz!>

our distorted images shimmering,

reflected dimly in the dusky rooms.

 

You took my hand and lifted me to my feet...

the gravity in your face belied by your glinting eyes,

<i thought: he is magic!>

and whirled me through hell's own gates,

into a palace of illusion and lies.

 

As we dipped and gracefully spun our way around the mirrored halls,

I glimpsed the silently mocking faces of those who watched..

A dim echo of laughter whispering softly round us.

<I thought I was  safe>

And still we danced...

my head buried in your shoulder.

 

The sudden rustling of wings,

the cacophonous twittering of a thousand sparrows...

woke me from my helpless reverie,

while splintered, shattering glass fell from round the rooms.

Screaming, anguished faces captured in the sparkling shards

 

I turned my face up to yours,

Seeking the answers in your dark eyes...

<Was it a riddle?>

and saw...

I was dancing with a ghost.

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 Reviews of "Danse Macabre"
Reviewed by haim kadman (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2007
By God it's a master-piece!

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on June 1, 2004
wonderful

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 2, 2004
luv the motif ... the imagery is also very intense ...

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2004
WONDERFUL writing, Candy!


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