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Every Mother's Son
by Candida L Eittreim → (All Poetry by Candida L Eittreim)
  
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I think.. in our hatred and fear of a faceless enemy, we forget somewhere a mother cries, just as we do, when she loses her son



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Our sons have no colour nor creed


these men who wear the flag of their lands with such pride


we carried deep inside our bodies safe


with such love...


 


They are every mother's son


named at birth


someones child...


 


there are no faceless bastards here


only someones son,


fighting in wars no one wants


as mothers watch, weeping in agony


seeing our children slaughter each other mercilessly.


 


We musn't forget, in anger and hate


that somewhere another mother grieves


her son bleeding slowly... dying by inches


defendng his ancestral home.


 


If war has a colour..


it is the rich crimson of death.


it gouts from torn flesh the same way for us all.


 



every mother's son


belongs to us all


as we weep for our dead children


no matter where they are


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 Reviews of "Every Mother's Son"
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on November 14, 2003
strongly written

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on November 13, 2003
A powerful and dramatic reminder of the pointlessness of war Candy.

Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
Very true, Very beautiful, Very sad. Excellent poem.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
Heartwrenching write, candy!

Debashish

Reviewed on November 9, 2003
heartwrenching write; very well done, candida; this really got to me. (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :(

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
So very true, Candida...add to that the horrors faced by those who survive...the memories and dreams that gnaw at them for the rest of their lives...
This is a profoundly sad but very real write...outstanding job.

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on November 8, 2003
So profound, and a beautifully written poem.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 8, 2003
An honest and timely reminder! May we all learn from it, and remember!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on November 8, 2003
So much truth and wisdom in these words...anyone who has a child or children can feel this poem! Thank you for posting this...~Z~

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on November 8, 2003
oh ty for this.....my son is a marine
pax

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on November 8, 2003
Wars are mostly the folly of testosterone-driven madmen, like the one we are in right now. Good job.

Reviewed by Latorial Faison
Reviewed on November 8, 2003
Candida, thanks for commenting on my poetry in recent days. I picked this poem not knowing that it was written by you; however, it was refreshing to find out that it was.

I was really attracted to the title, and you have outdone yourself within the poem. You grasp the painstaking reality of what this war means.

I am writing a poem on a similar theme for my mother-in-law right now as my husband, her son, is at war in Iraq with his battalion from Ft. Hood.

I could feel each word in every line, and I think this is a wonderful poem. You capture the essence of what every mother feels who has seen her son taken by war.

I think that America has forgotten what death is; it has forgotten that war begets death (on both sides). Sometimes we can be our own wrorst enemy.

No news is good news for a mother who has lost her son in this war.
Keep on writing. I really enjoyed this poem. Great job!

Latorial Faison, Poet & Author
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Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2003
Wisdom at its best. Great write!


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