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Drawing the Line
by Kathy Kubik → (All Poetry by Kathy Kubik)
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DRAWING THE LINE


I trace the outline,
purple on flesh.

Hands shaky, needle ready to puncture,
penetrate up and down,
injecting at a rate of one hundred vibrations per minute
through epidermis to dermis,
from my mind to the paper.
Contract, then ease.

Steady, steady
That’s it.

I wait for the right minute, word, syllable.
Shallow grooves of an outline forms.
Sometimes wings of an eagle emerge,
cinnaquins and sestinas.
Other times the Tasmanian devil,
with poorly constructed sentences and overused metaphors.

After five lines or so I no longer exist.
It’s pen against paper, needle on skin.

Some are black and white, others stencils of color:
voodoo orange, star glow blue, Venetian brown,
four different shades of red alone -
Devil’s red, dragon red, Spanish red and scarlet red
I overlap each line of verse to ensure solid, even hues.
I don’t miss one section of skin.

I run my fingers over the puncture wound words,
the lines elevated, like reading Braille.

What you see on the page
is the ink that’s left in the skin
after I bleed.

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 Reviews of "Drawing the Line"
Reviewed on July 8, 2006

This composition is a poetic accomplishment in imagery and contents.

I enjoyed the reading of "Drawing the Line".

Keep posting, Poet.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 8, 2006
EXCELLENT, Kathy! I LIKE this greatly and what a wonderful introduction to your work! Thank you so much for your visit to my page today, and think I will just revisit these stunning images and fine metaphors you have penned for us here just a couple more times before I reluctantly take my leave for now. Funnily enough, my mind has been working on a colour swatch to describe having a Yellow Fever innoculation... but I would never have conceived of anything quite as deep and mind-branding as this. Very well done! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Wow! this is fantastic! you painted this one like a master!
Love the vibrant colors/words!

Eileen^

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Couldn't have been said any more dramatic. Verry well done.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Yes, you have captured the essence of the writer and poet really well in this one, almost erotic in it's sensitivity to the written word.

Felix

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Wonderful!
Gave me a new perspective on my work.
We do bleed, do we not. You penned it well.

Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Kathy,

Poetic tattooing...love it! Superb analogy and write.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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