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Jake the Snake
by Diane Thompson → (All Poetry by Diane Thompson)
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Jake the Snake

Jake the Snake, I found at the lake,
I brought him home with me.
I took him to bed, and covered his head,
We both went off to sleep.

I thought I was dreamin’, Mom was screamin’,
Nothing like ever before.
I got to the room, not a minute too soon,
There he was on the floor.

I said he’s mine, everything’s fine,
I’ll take him back to my bed.
I turned to flee, but it wasn’t to be,
Mom had plans for me instead.

Jake looked afraid, by every move made,
He didn’t feel safe in my arms.
Mom said he must leave, I couldn’t believe,
Jake had caused such alarm.

I went to the yard, how very hard,
To part with my new friend.
We said our goodbyes, with tears in my eyes,
The friendship had come to an end.

I’ll never forget, the day we met,
My friend, my buddy, my snake.
I sent him away, that very day,
Back at the lake was Jake the snake.













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 Reviews of "Jake the Snake"
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2006
Great poem! Loved it!

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on May 16, 2006
Cute. Wish I could read it as a child. Glad I have discovered you. RB

Reviewed by Leslie Bond
Reviewed on January 31, 2006
lol. poor snake, i'm sure he missed you. Leslie

Reviewed on August 31, 2004
Diane,

Fabulous piece - rhymed supreme!

Robert

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on August 14, 2004
Hey at least your Mom allowed you to free Jake! We lived next door to a canal and there were snakes in our yard quite often. Nearly all were non poisonous bug eaters. But my Mother would turn three shades of white, and start shrieking for either my dad or I to grab the shovel and kill whatever snake dared to show his face near our clothesline. Being an obedient child, I always complied, but I can't tell you how much being a snake assasin has haunted me over the years! I have always rather liked and respected snakes despite my mother's aversion to them. This write is adorable! Michelle

Reviewed on August 13, 2004
sssssssssssssssssssssssssssuperb ssssssssssssssssssssstory, diane! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Reginald Birch (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Wonderful, brings back memories of one of my sons when we lived abroad. Thank you,
Reg.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Loved this poem, Diane; it brought back some wonderful childhood memories.

When I was a kid, I had a pet snake named Tiny, but I kept him in my pocket because I knew my mother would do the same thing.


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