Words on the Wind (poem) by Carole Mathys on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 13, 2011

will there be more
when the winds blow in
and stars go blind
as darkness wraps you within
will the winds remember
the words you left behind

A lot of pathos here--makes you wonder what it is all about.

rege

Reviewed by Johanna Fields (Reader)

Reviewed on September 21, 2009

Carole,This is lovely done Johanna

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

Another gem! Will the winds remember the words you left behind....awesome!

Anna

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on August 10, 2009

Carole....this is an exceptional work...so many thoughts within a poem where one can read and reflect within the questions of time and memories...

really nice work...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 1, 2009

Beautiful piece Carole
Your lovely words sound like a Goddess
from the sea are creating them
loved this one
Peace & love be with you

William

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on July 31, 2009

This poem and picture are so well-suited, I really enjoyed this.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on July 31, 2009

BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman

Reviewed on July 30, 2009

Carole, "Words on the Wind" is absolutely beautiful. Your words, not like "words on the wind" are noticed and heard and appreciated. Beautifully well spoken words, indeed.
Mark

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on July 30, 2009

"words on the wind", concepts that are cast to the same fate as lines scribbled in the sand -- here for but a brief time, laid to waste by the next breath of stirring air -- memory exists only as long as it pleases the whims of the wind -- the next word like the next thought is never assured -- give thanks and scribe the word that is here and now -- your poem is haunting Carole -- asking one to contemplate,the here the now, the possibilities the future may hold for us -- a very creative poem written with a wonderful romantic flair -- Carole, thanks for sharing this wonderful poem with me -- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 30, 2009

So stunning and soul touching.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

captures the ethereal and elusive essence of words ...

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

Carole,
This is rich as good fruit cake but not heavy or stodgy, and I like in particular how the poem grows in intensity and depth as it unfolds and ends wonderfully, those two great last lines. Kudos!

John

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

Oh wow, now that is a view!!!! So deep in thought, pondering and wondering. A beautiful piece indeed...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

"while ideas like channel markers guide you to where they hide" lines such as this in your work bring out the romantic in all us who were once sailors or just loved the sea. The ocean is romance and you captured that theme well amid crisp but cool images, well done Carole.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

A wonderful offering; thank you, Carole. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

Carole, once again you capture those elusive words
with such beauty and intelligence...

ideas like channel markers
guide you...

-gene.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

So grand and brilliant.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

Brilliant thoughts composed this splendid poem Carole!
Beautifully done!

ET