The Old Journal
watching as fingers of light
reach across the sky
burning holes in the early evening
the leaves on the trees outside
seemed to tremble with portent
unable to contain their excitement
at the change in the atmosphere
you could almost smell the burned ions
of spent electricity in the air
as thunder rumbled the shutters
of the old house
making windows shake
thoughts wandering aimlessly
her words like fragments of glass
scraping at his memories
will she return to fill the empty places
where darkness has a sad sound
and loneliness seemed perched
on phone lines like crows
her journal still on the beach chair
where she left it
she glanced back only once
at her old journal
where ink from the words
smeared and ran across folded pages
dripping off the edges of the journal
into the sand then swirled out to the sea
Carole Mathys
November 3, 2010
I must apologize, for the many time I've been absent from the den
and through my own fault miss out on treasures such as this
well penned Carole
Love & Peace be with you
William
Love Tinka
deeply felt. lovely, lovely, lovely...
be well, poetess,
carolyn
even the memories will all eventually wash away...
just as us...
Hugs,
Anna
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Very revealing.
Always,
Deborah
Regis
Namaste
Your friend, Mark
and richly charged emotion without going over the top.
This is very fine indeed.
Yes!
John
Blessings,
Christine
As good a definition of sadness as I believe I have ever read, Carole. The poem oozed so much sadness and loneliness I could almost taste it. I'm saving this 'un.