Succubus (poem) by Paul Williams on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Saberi Roy

Reviewed on August 29, 2007

something dark about it. well written

Reviewed by Peggy Kelly (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2007

very intense and interesting

Reviewed by Winter Knight (Reader)

Reviewed on August 8, 2007

I love this you have a talent for description!

Reviewed by Michael Hemingway

Reviewed on August 3, 2007

Good poem and even better picture! Imagery and lyricism were also good! Your ending is too shocking for me, though, as a guy, well, you know how succubi are! Sort of reminds me of that long line scene within the movie, Airport, aboard the plane to silence or quiet the hysterical stewardess! Take a number or be first in line!

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 15, 2007

I have this pict. and another of a succub.
This didn't enter my active mind Paul!
Good on you!
YOu miss someoneee...
A gem I will treasure!
:)
Stay Positive!
STay SAFE!
:)
WArm hugs, Warrior Lady, SG

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on July 12, 2007

Paul...this is outstanding! Much closer to the legends of the succubi then my work, Cravings, which is based on that subject as well.
You have blended perfectly the eroticism and spine chilling aspects of the legend...and added a bit of payback...well done!

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on June 28, 2007

OOOOO Deep, Dark and Delicious! You sound dangerous. SC

Reviewed by R Beeman

Reviewed on June 23, 2007

wonderful to tell i must say. an erotic thought provoking write.

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on June 13, 2007

Sounds like someone is going for lunch.Well done.

Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

VERY EROTIC AND EXOTIC.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 23, 2007

Paul,

DAYUM. This one is intense and effectively chilling!!!! Well done!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on April 18, 2006

The tale of SUCCUBUS/INCUBUS saved many people from the guillotine, GAS-CHAMBER and CASTRATION.

This composition, "Succubus" takes my mind to twenty-five centuries of thrillers and mysteries... I enjoyed the contents and the reading of "Succubus".

Healthy Life, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 14, 2005

Vivid and alive this grabs you right from the title, this is the first of your work I have read but I will be adding you to my favs. By the way any chance of sharing that address?

Felix

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on March 2, 2005

Dear Paul,
You mentioned that I had not responded to this poem. I had read it but it disturbed me so deeply I could not respond. You write superbly well (too well maybe) and it brought it all too much to life for me. The concept of a 'succubus' entity is a frightening one.
Love Chanti (Now you know I read it. Am I a baby or what?)

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on March 1, 2005

lol
i like this........I wrote a poem about an incubus sometime back.....its an interesting concept.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on February 10, 2005

Oh, my. Those succubi most run amuck in Merry Ole England. I think Ian Thorpe is also troubled by such. LOL Damn, where are all the incubi?

Loved the write, Paul.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

Horror with a twist, Paul. Well done. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Great write, Paul!

Reviewed by Mary Quire

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Interesting picture. Even more interesting poem. I do like the ending. Best wishes.

M.Rose

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

LOL
Oh my dark, and Gothic and sexy
Oh my dark, and Gothic and sexy
oH well you get what i'm saying...enjoyed
this what a wonderful surprise!!!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

outstanding Paul
Well Penned

William ....Peace

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

A fine piece.... of writing..... but I ain't going there!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

Is Andy out to rattle my bars on your pages, or what??!! I hope he's not talking about me!! Woah, scary lady!! This is excellently penned, Paul, and is a taste of real "Goth": your diction and tone are brilliant. Even the "twist" is pure Jekyll and Hyde. I am impressed by your restraint; for the subject matter, I am sure many of us would have been tempted to "pad out" the obvious tale in this, but you have kept it delightfully "clean" (??!!) with just the telling detail that makes it muscular. Can just feel the "cold, hard kiss" with this one - metaphorically speaking! AND you manage to maintain your poetic tone! Very well done, TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

Wow....what a ending....watch out...be on alert...but then again nightmare do happen!!

Love Tinka :)

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

Yes it well penned and like you said it had a surprise ending.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

Oh my, this one is compelling. Well penned Paul.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

Dear Paul,

Oh the "Nightmare" very vivid indeed, the picture is amazing. Excellent write, but I have come to expect this quality from you ;) I daresay, don't venture too close to where she lives lol.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

Yup she sure sounds like many brit gurls I've met.

Paul; the yanky ones are the best.

Just keep the accent..

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

oh my! you've been succubussed;-)
Paul, a very heady spell from hell;-)
Excellent write!

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

i love the way this started and ended...