The Promise
Tis’ dark this night my love,
the wind lashes the rain
with a vengeful arrogance
and sends timbered fingers
dancing across the study
window with an accusing diction.
Tis’ dark this night my love,
the shadows hold is cold
against the dying embers of the fire.
You are my only warmth, my comfort.
Your eyes enamour, even now…
they allure and entice, catching in dying light.
I loose myself in their ocular discourse
and remember…
your beauty and grace, your
tender hands caressing my face
our pulsating bodies entwined
and the new heights we’d find.
My salacious enigma who made me slave
to her sybaritic decree
to which I willingly succumbed.
And remember…
The promise we made
to go beyond the grave,
the eternal love we swore…
that was of course
before you turned whore.
Tis’ dark this night my love,
I kept my promise
though, not as you would’ve liked.
You let green eyed Asmodeus
take me, his talons
rending a shrivelled heart
but I kept my promise
that we’d never part.
Tis’ dark this night my love,
my heart weighs heavy
and hands are red with blood.
I just wanted to look into your eyes
once more…
before I returned the jar to the shelf
next to rest of your dismembered self.
© Paul Williams 2006
Regis
"The Promise" most chilling lines!
"You let green eyed Asmodeus
take me, his talons
rending a shrivelled heart
but I kept my promise
that we’d never part"
'Tis a very dark, intense poem!
Excellent writing!
Thank you,
Sheila
I write dark poetry as well;-)
Almost as creepy as the ghost in my PC!!
Very well written Chuckie!!
Love Tinka
OK ... this was creepy and masterfully effective. Your muse on this one must have been the progeny of Steven King.
Your lines:
"My salacious enigma who made me slave
to her sybaritic decree
to which I willingly succumbed."
was stunningly effective. Very rarely does one hear or see the word "sybaritic"
A good synonym would be voluptuary, also very rarely used.
In fraternity and poetic vision ...
A great write my friend ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Oh my goodness..Why did you get that photo? Great writing :)
Antoinette
PS Have you been hangin out with Andy the Ripper?!
Thanks. Not the poem to read just before bedtime!!!!!!!!!!! A chiller thriller, indeed...sure to feed my nightmare factory and make it work overtime. THANKS. (Well done, by the way, but BRRRRRRRRRR!)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Dark one, this!
God Bless,
Lew
Sage
A gripping and terrifying seasonal offering..
I am glad this is fiction..;-)
Peter