Layered with multiple crystals They dance in a twirling motion Effortlessly floating towards the Earth While brushing feather-like kisses To anything they touch Spiraling down from the stars Their glittered beauty dresses Mother Earth Reflections of palest silver, blue, pink and white It’s as if the stars have graced us with some magic powdered dust Hush is the sound they make
Absolutely beautifully written..."brushing feather-like kisses to anything they touch....you make snow sound magical. Great poem, Helen. I'm from Canada, where there is lots of snow, and you made me see it a little differently...nice imagery.
That last line is awesome. I enjoyed the imagery in this poem. You bring the picture to life!
Sheila
Reviewed by James Blaylock (Reader)
Reviewed on March 14, 2008
Wow, I really loved this one.
jkb
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2007
Hush is the sound where we hear and learn the wise things of life..
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2007
A beautiful write Helen, just like your book. I read it and reviewed it again on your actual book review. Just thought you should know. Good work! God Bless, Holly
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