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Storm in your eyes
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Like most of my poems, this evolved from one single image....
There’s sadness in this thunder Gray and sullen And swift moving Like the storm in your eyes I tried to hold onto you But, like fog, you were further away The closer I got And, you ran through my fingers like misty air As my knees crashed to the ground Like lightning And my sobs became the rain overhead You ran and were gone Leaving nothing but havoc in your wake.

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Reviews of "Storm in your eyes"

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

Carrie,

Stunning imagery and heartfelt emotion--BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

Emotively and meaningfully enthralling verses, Carrie. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

Wonderful imagery and a beautiful painting of an image seen and percieved.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

Oh Carrie, this was outstanding, beautifully expressed, loved this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

Unrequited love is like this a thunder storm. A very compelling write.

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

carrie,

this is beautiful in its strife
sometimes the most attractive
things in our lives are the most
obscure and intangible

thanks,
d.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

What they say about the eyes not lying is true and if you look you can read so much in someones eyes and I think you have read and transferred your reading so well in this write. Well done Carrie.

Hugs,
Felix

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