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Indifference
by Carrie A Deveney → (All Poetry by Carrie A Deveney)
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The sun is painted black


And I'm watching blindly


As you rise to leave


I hide my face to feign


Indifference.


But it breaks my heart


That your caring only goes so far


The skyline through the window


Is like a silhouette against


The pale pink sky


And it saddens me


Another sunset and I'm still alone


Your padded words are the last I'll hear


Until I'm reborn into someone


Your indifference won't touch


It's come to this


So much pain, I've finally gone numb.


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 Reviews of "Indifference"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 23, 2005
Once again you've reached right into my soul with your verses, Carrie. I find this emotively meaningful and I can relate totally to it. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on March 5, 2005
deep painful write......i agree with Sue

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on March 4, 2005
from the pain, comes understanding and once you've attained understanding, you can only grow...now if it just didn't hurt so damned much huh

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 3, 2005
Deep write....BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on March 2, 2005
the end of one cycle, is the beginning of a new one........and the chance to grow......reading this I see the positive side of possibilities......

Reviewed on March 2, 2005
Your heart shows in each line.

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on March 1, 2005
I can relate a little too well right now.
Sometimes poems are mirrors, and we need to know to fix a bad hair day.
John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 1, 2005
One of the saddess emotions that we force ourselves to use as a defence is indifference. I have also used it in the past when I've grown to tired to fight, argue and yes to love. There is a bright side though it is a self inflicted emotion and can be lifted when and if we decide to.

Felix


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