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Trigger
by Carrie A Deveney → (All Poetry by Carrie A Deveney)
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I don't like summaries, but I thought I'd explain why its so short....it was a fleeting image and sometimes condensed works work better for those types of images....

I stare through the coffin


Of your mind


Your blank look frightens me


Will you be gone soon?


Will your finger frinally find its trigger?


I hold out hope that


You can find some sort of solace in this life


But, I know that you're long past that.
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 Reviews of "Trigger"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 22, 2005
So few words that express such powerful emotion and meaning; so well done. Thank you, Carrie. Regis
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on March 21, 2005
agree with felix here
dark yet oh so real
enjoyed the fleeting pain
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 16, 2005
As per the emptiness of feeling lost and when the hope starts to dwindle maybe the trigger finger justs gets a little itchy.

Felix
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2005
Yes it is thought provoking because I have known people who have had their fingers on the trigger literally and in fact.
Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on March 16, 2005
Thought provoking... at one time or another, many think of that trigger... but a little faith often brings solace...
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