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Broken Doll
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a little dark, but the heart feels what it feels.
You said you’d always be there You said I was beautiful Then, you threw me away. A broken doll on the floor Among the dirt and ashes of your lies Fueled and burned by my broken heart. They smear me with their filth My eyes clouded Hair matted I’m strung together With thread made my Memories of your abandonment With my womb infected with Hatred of you. You made me do it! And part of me will always hate you for that.

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Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on June 2, 2005

Toxic love. You've used your muse well express it's poison...

Reviewed by Frank Whyte

Reviewed on May 29, 2005

There is nothing quite so demeaning as feeling used and discarded. This was both imaginative and visceral and I liked it very much.

Frank

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2005

Powerful write.
"Among the dirt and ashes of your lies" Excellent line.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 22, 2005

emotively powerful poetry, revealing the pain of a past relationship ... thanx for sharing this intense poem, Carrie ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 20, 2005

The imagery emphasizes the emotive strength and powerful meaning of this piece. Well done, Carrie. Love, peace, and strength to you. Regis

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 19, 2005

This cuts so deeply into my heart, so raw and painful, excellently expressed,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on May 18, 2005

You made me do it!

And part of me will always hate you for that.

..oh I do hope this is NOT a bigraphical..if so..forgivness is screaming at you..forgive = for give (ing)..
very heart-wrenching piece..
it is well written.

Vesna*

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 17, 2005

This may be dark but it is also ultra dramatic and vividly expressive. You really digestd your topic and spit it out whole as a great piece of art.

Felix

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