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The Martyr
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She enters the desert


Painful blisters plague her feet


But she walks on


Entering the sun


Letting it burn away her skin


Releasing her soul


And she cools


As the sun dies


So she can live.


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 Reviews of "The Martyr"
Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on June 16, 2005
very provacative, excellent imagery and methaphor

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on June 14, 2005
this read like some existential riddle, and i found myself searching for the answer in the lines you'd written. i'm not sure if i found them, either. lol a thoughtful work, poet. you definitely drew me in.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on June 11, 2005
Wishful Thinking_

Credit For Write...

TRASK

Reviewed on June 11, 2005
A very powerful write
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Huda Orfali
Reviewed on June 10, 2005
Very powerful and beautiful rendering of martyrdom
thanks for sharing
love and peace

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 10, 2005
A woman with a higher purpose and vision in every step... seems like a Phoenix-write to me, Carrie! Having a cause one is prepared to die for perhaps make sense of living. Love the cleanness of your lines and the crispness of your message. A wonderful poetic crucible, thank you. Kate x

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on June 10, 2005
True rendering of your character, Carrie. Some need their pain and embrace it. Fine write...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 10, 2005
Superb capture of a martyred moment!

Blessings to you,
Eileen

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 10, 2005
Very in deep look at what this women is walking away from or walking to.

Felix


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