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David
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Magnetic Poetry III

you stormed into my void
slowly
like mist flooding the
winter shadows
or wind pounding the blackness
of my summer sky

I have lived fast
and these dreams have
crushed the sweet sleep
I so delicately need
but you shine
and you made the rain stop
and the sea still

watch this girl
as she is falling into you

only when together my friend
moments play through
then heave in like music
and scream out
the beauty of an elaborate symphony

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 Reviews of "David"
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
Oh~~~
this is beauty!!!
this is what beauty sounds like!!!
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2005
Again Mari has summed up what I wanted to say about the last line.
Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2005
I love that last line. I think it sums up the whole beautiful piece. :)
Reviewed by Mary Quire
Reviewed on February 3, 2005
Very nicely done. I agree with Felix on the wordplay. Awesome.

M.Rose
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 3, 2005
Mia nice use of wordplay here to create a special symetry of love, well done.

Felix
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