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Alyssa Jo, II
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I told her if she was here,


I’d dance with her.


“You would never dance


with me before,” she said.


She’s right. I wouldn’t.


And now it’s too late.


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 Reviews of "Alyssa Jo, II"
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on February 11, 2005
whoa~~~~~
striking message
like a blow to the throat!!!
thanks

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on February 11, 2005
mia,

so much in so little
love this-all so real
thanks,
d.

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on February 10, 2005
Short and to the point with a message and feeling that lingers...Enjoyed..

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 10, 2005
We often procrastinate in love for differnet reasons. fear, anger, other committments or just lack of interest at the time. Unfortunately life does not always play fair in love and sometomes will not give us a second chance. Beautiful simplistic write, I love it.
Felix

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on February 10, 2005
Sad. Love the brevity.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2005
Well this is how it is sometimes.


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