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Bustin' Rhymes
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you're all I need to get by


dont know why


you got me bustin these rhymes


cause it was just a day or two


before I met you


when rain was fallin down


all around


 


wait


 


maybe it wasn't rain


maybe it was dreams


fallin down like they was streams


rushin through a rocky


horror picture scene


talkin' bout some crazy shit


that makes you wanna run and hit


a wall


or fall


into the oblivion of what was


nothing at all


and baby I'm for real


in this here rhyming spiel


cause even though


I'm afraid to show


what you really mean to me


I got this glow


that can’t be anything


but love you see


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 Reviews of "Bustin' Rhymes"
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 9, 2006
Mia,

This would make one hell of a rap.

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino
Reviewed on March 8, 2006
Mia,

Maybe you should put it to music...it really flows.

Peace,

B

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 8, 2006
I like this and it glows with your own special magic that reeks of your love for this person.

Felix

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on March 8, 2006
Plenty of spirit and passion exuding in this strong and forceful pen, Mia
I'm sure he got the message..lols
Peter

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on March 8, 2006
Great rhymes that spit a lot of fiery passion.


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