A Mother's Lament (poem) by Nicole L. Davis Vergara on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ofira Sephiroth (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2009

Very powerful poem

Reviewed on March 16, 2009

This is a very sad and powerful poem.A well written piece

Edwin

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

A most moving and meaningful write, Nicole. Thank you for sharing it and provoking thought and emotion. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

Excellent expression.

Reviewed by Phyllis Du'Gas (Reader)

Reviewed on August 7, 2007

Nicole, this is very painful and touched a part of me deep inside.

Reviewed by Jerry Engler

Reviewed on May 15, 2007

This is a terribly powerful poem showing not only the depth of the hurt but the talent of craft...Jerry

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

Deeply touching and quite painful.

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on April 29, 2007

A meaningful and deeply touching write filled with such vivid mind pictures. You have much talent.
Chanti

Reviewed by Theresa curnow (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2007

This really touched me. Its very emotional and deep and the words convey the message straight to the heart.

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on April 22, 2007

this is a deeply emotional write on a subject that does not get near enough attention. Excellent work here.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 19, 2007

Oh Nikki this touches very deeply....hope all is okay sis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on April 18, 2007

This touches deeply I cannot even comment the power I witnessed in this piece...........

Peace,
josie

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 17, 2007

This is so very heart-breaking, my heart goes out to you, outstandingly written and a very powerful warning.

Reindeer

Reviewed by Rita Fagin

Reviewed on April 17, 2007

Thank you Nikki, I'm sorry I'm just now reading your wonderful words of encouragement and I thank you for them. Thank you as well for catching my grammatical error. I pray you continue to enjoy my work. Keep writing and rhyming. Take care, simply rita

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 17, 2007

Written only as an extremely loving mother could, Nikki, and we all can feel your pain.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 17, 2007

The pain I feel reading it, I pray you find peace within, words don't suffice how to express the heartbreak I feel for you.
Indeed it is wonderful to see you writing once more..

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

My heart breaks for this little child. Her suffering was uncalled for, listen, always listen to the little shining star. As a parent I thank you for sharing this.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

we must listen to our little stars before their light burns out ...

excellent poetry, Nicole ...

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

This has to be one of the most heart-wrenching writes I have read in a long while...
"A Mother's Lament" truly is disturbing to another mother...especially having my own teenagers!
At times I can feel their struggles with the new pressures of high school and friends who come and go...the images they conjure up out of misunderstandings...etc...It worries a parent everyday! We must never let a day go by without sharing our wisdom and concerns...staying on top of the problem before they even exists!
Thank you for sharing...I know this had to be very difficult for you to write!
My heart goes out to you and yours...Be Blessed~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

Faith In Yourself (As Momma)To Overcome You As I Will Meet Overtake Destroy Your Human & Spirit Accusers!

Tears TRASK

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

Nikki, I won't forget your offer of friendship; your comment; your thoughts; your words. This is an incredibly powerful and moving write. --Jeff

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

Nicole my heart breaks to read of this sad condition. I pray help will be found that provides an answer for future recovery. I'm so happy to see you back! Have missed you, though this one hurts to read, you never lose your gift for writing!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

This is so incredibly sad and tugs at the very heart of me, Nicole. No mother should ever have to go through what you've written about. A timely message to all parents.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

Emotions poemized, story delivered... "A Mother's Lament" is poetized, and the message is delivered.

Thank You for sharing "A Mother's Lament".

I salute You, Poet.

Gratefully,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

Oh, this is a heartbreaker Nicole!!
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre (Reader)

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

WOW... Poignant and gut-wrenching! Great write!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

Hopefully it is caught early and can be treated.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

An eye-opener...candid and speakable truth...low self-esteem, especially in teen girls gives signals...a mother does hear, a womb cry many years after the child has been born...it's good to see you back posting, Nicole...

Sage

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

Powerful and heartshattering, Nikki; very well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

Nikki,

A powerful warning to parents to talk to their children, to LISTEN to them. A powerful warning to children to talk to their parents, to LISTEN to them. You may have saved lives today. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.