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Garden of Thorns

by Lloydene F Hill — Read all 32 poems by Lloydene F Hill

Thursday, October 9, 2003

You sit there smiling in your paradise of lies, you tend that garden carefully, like a demonic cat with soul absorbing eyes.


Sneering, leering, snickering, bickering, blatantly bold, have I fallen out of favor, now that I will not do as I'm told.


Emotionless prig, heartless and cruel, so coldly content, to keep up the ruse.


Incapable of passion's fire, for you have no soul, unless of course I am yours to control.


Your garden blossoms with falsehood and pride,  the blooms infested with evil bloodsucking flies, so terrifying that poisonous spiders hide.


You laugh at my logic, belittle my spirit, squeeze my heart and feelings in a ragged rusty vice, taking aim at my soul with a virulent dart, in an effort to throttle me nice.


Vex me not by presenting your garden as a venue to relax, make love, be reborn. The lies of love that spill from thin bloodless lips, are only to convey the hidden meaning of your want between my hips.


Never will I succumb to a life of your ruthless surprise, becoming ugly evasive, and soul worn, I'd sooner pick myself up by the heels and toss me over a wall into a garden of thorns. 


©2003 Lloydene F. Hill



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Reviewed on January 31, 2007

Outstanding poemization in "Garden of Thorns" leaves a wise aroma of imagination.

I have enjoyed the reading of "Garden of Thorns".

Healthy long creative life, Poet.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 10, 2003
luv your imagery, metaphor and style...

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on October 10, 2003
Oh Sweetie, this is the best thing that you've ever written. Sending you love & hugs!

Your Sis, JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
This is one of the most painful writes I've ever read. Maybe because I was once married to one of his shadows. I threw myself over the wall, I found the thorns more comfortable than lying next to him every night. Great write. Lisa

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Yes I can relate too.. put me outa my misery if you please, rather than drag on the facade.

Great expression, very relative to real life.
Ty
Ch'erie


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