AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Bob Boze, iPeter Jessop, iDarryl Jenkins, iErin Kelly-Moen, iDeborah Frontiera, iAnita Shaw, iRichard Cederberg, iJohn Burns, iCharles Keller, iMiller Caldwell, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Rachelle writer@rachellerogers.com

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Books
· Poetry
· Stories
· 11 Titles
· 12 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Jan, 2006

Rachelle writer@rachellerogers.com, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



The Second Thing
by Rachelle writer@rachellerogers.com → (All Poetry by Rachelle writer@rachellerogers.com)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

This poem is from a series of personal (as opposed to more universal) poems included within the context of specific experiences recounted in my new memoir, Rare Atmosphere.

 

The Second Thing

you'll notice when
you see me is 
silver hair winding
to the shoulder
with a mind of its own.

I like to think
it will distract you
if only for a moment
from the seasoned
portrait it frames.

Like to think
the true hue
of any chef d'oeuvre
deepens with age.
(I have it on good
authority oil paint
never completely dries.)

The first thing
you'll notice
when you see me,
however,
is the light I carry
like calla lilies
in my arms.

 

 

 


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "The Second Thing"
Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on April 27, 2013
your image sounds brightening
budd

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 27, 2013
Nicely narcissistic.

Ron

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 27, 2013
How wonderful to frame what God gave you in such an exquisite manner. A woman's hair is her crown of glory.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on April 27, 2013
I see only your picture that introduces you, and your smile was the first thing that caught my eye. We all could do a lot worse.


Popular Poetry (Poetry)
  1.  Catching Happiness...
  2.  Finding Trust Again
  3.  Nightsky
  4.  Reality of Another Kind
  5.  Spindrift
  6.  Kindness
  7.  Our Restless Minds
  8.  Luxury of Solitude
  9.  In The Still of The Night
  10.  Dream Just a Dream
  11.  Life's Enormous Green Chest
  12.  Sediment Within the Soul
  13.  Roadkill Memoriam
  14.  Hunting for Truth
  15.  Whisper Pens
  16.  In Praise of Anonymity
  17.  I Have Spent My Entire Life
  18.  Shaved Reflections
  19.  Feeling Lonely
  20.  Serrated Smiles
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Beat Writings & Ramblings by William haynes

beat poetry like Corso, Ginsberg and Kerouac  
Member BookAds

Drifter's Logic by William haynes

a beat take on life, loss and the meaning of it all+  
Member BookAds

Key of Mist by Robin Ouzman Hislop

The Poems of Guadalupe Grande La llave de niebla (2003) Key of Mist Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop & Amparo Arrospide  
Member BookAds