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49 degrees in LA
by William F DeVault → (All Poetry by William F DeVault)
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I was struck by an early morning scene when I was scouting a return to LA last year...

Four twenty five in the morning.
Santa Monica boulevard
looks like the rapture hit last night
and all the painted saints went to heaven.
The pavement wet and dark
like the scar tissue of my soul
that you don't seem to really mind.
You should be here.  You belong here
with the fading Gypsies and seven foot trannies.
Construction blocks my ramp to the 405
but I can always count on Lincoln
to snake me south to the airport
my rental car silent with radio off
because the music of my city is all I need to hear.
You should be here.  You belong here
with the Promenade cellist and the vampire boys
who walk Ventura, never knowing I can see them.
I am their king, scouting a return from exile.
Forty nine degrees in LA.
Boiling point for transfiguration.
Got to get the alchemists lined up.
Got to get the alchemists lined up.
I'm coming home, even if alone.
I'm coming home.


William F. DeVault.  all rights reserved.


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 Reviews of "49 degrees in LA"
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on May 5, 2014
After 25 years I escaped LA. Construction will block your access to the 405 for the rest of your life and Santa Monica will remain rapture's bulls eye. That said I hope your return works out and your royal subjects pay their appropriate tribute.

Patrick

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 4, 2014
i really like your voicing and imagery in this poem ... gave me a introspective temperature reading of LA ;)

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on May 3, 2014
Your words are no doubt unique to LA,
but you express a universal sentiment that is easy to identify with.
This is down to the pavement good.

Reviewed by D.T. de Bruijn
Reviewed on May 2, 2014
Very nice. Nostalgic in a bit dark way, like a city born would say. Grtz, D.T.

Reviewed on May 2, 2014
Good visual effects and imagery.

Sandie


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