Well you had me going Doug. Terrific imagery, and the ending was a mighty jolt. Great job. Michelle
Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
"you sang my name
through an open window"
I love this line, it's like climbing on the roof to declare to the world, I love you.
"...to awake
in a long-lost
dream."
This line is a great twist... to awaken to a dream.
The whole piece talked to me and of course, another unique title that grabbed my eye.
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2004
Really quite a beautifully written romance. Love the way you word things through this..
Happiest and Warmest of holidays and all days.
God Bless you and your family,
Tracey
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
through an open window"
I love this line, it's like climbing on the roof to declare to the world, I love you.
"...to awake
in a long-lost
dream."
This line is a great twist... to awaken to a dream.
The whole piece talked to me and of course, another unique title that grabbed my eye.
Happiest and Warmest of holidays and all days.
God Bless you and your family,
Tracey
vividly penned ...
"you sang my name
through an open window"
I like this piece very much, thank you.