Good Morning Mr.Sunshine, you brighten up my day. Come sit beside me in your way.
"Lonely Days"
The Bee Gees
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Between Dawn and the Midnight Moon
I remember the sunrise... blithely igniting the horizon, dangling, precariously, above the apex… as light, streaming through billowing ivory translucence embellished the wonder in your morning eyes. It was as though the past night's moon were imbedded there, just for me... full and shining in orbed perfection reflecting bare limbs beyond the glass and the candescence within your gaze.
Were your eyes their usual verdigris? Was it possible the deep indigo that surrounds them changed their familiar hue in their capture of the moon? Or... was it the fruition of that desire you always find in me as I lay close…beside you, in the tangle of fine linens and plumped down, seduced between the warmth of radiant aurora and the abduction of Midnight's moon? And as you smiled and looked into my acquisitive eyes… You found, reflected, the same visions you share, I will forever dream… with you.
It's summer vacation again, Taylor, and I finally have some time to read and reflect and get caught up. This one is so passionate and lovely, every word a celebration.
Ta,
It is a blessing to see the sunrise and the moon at the same time. I love the way the sun paints the hues of indigo as it rises, bringing a new day, and with it the singing of birds. I'm glad you are one of us who take the time to notice such things.
Walt
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2007
This is enchanting but its there again in between the lines, hidden for only few to find. What is it? Holly
Where have you been all my life? I've read three of your poems, and I am utterly amazed by the power, the imagery of your words. Thank you: tracking you. That was I don't miss any more!! This, no exception: marvelous lines with an ethereal quality of dream. Yes. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
You have a wonderful way with words. I enjoyed this work very much and appreciate your talent. Have a great day.
Chris
The sensual muse is intoxicating and always interesting. One thing about you Taylor ... you are true to your calling, and never fail in your ability to arouse the imagination.
Richard ...
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2007
Beautiful Poem Taylor-I have missed seeing your poetry
So lovely, full of passion and a quiet desire.....
Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2007
I like the way you have created a sense of magnetic tension in this poem with the use of opposing forces, astronomical, earthly and emotional: sun vs. moon, past night's moon vs. imbedded in eyes, radiant aurora vs. abduction of midnight's moon, desire vs. seduced, acquisitive eyes vs. reflected visions. These images serve to intensify the vision, as La Belle Rouge indicates below. Sage's review also hits the mark dead center in her characteristic poetic prosaic style. "Transference of light from the heavens into the eyes of her lover" is an integral theme you maintain from beginning to end. There is definitely some "Moon alchemy" going on here, commingled with the elements of human chemistry. I wholeheartedly agree with Bill Broome: "The quality is never surprising... only the suddenness of your work." The graphic is the perfect companion to this piece as is the quote you have chosen. Like your fellow poets, I am also glad to see you back. This one was certainly worth the wait!
Your friend,
~Butch Howard
Reviewed by Tiana Jett (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2007
Such beautifully penned emotions, Taylor ... hugs
Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2007
The powerful emotions expressed in this love poem bowled me over. Amazing vocabulary in this exquisite love poem. Lydi**
Moon alchemy, transference of the Light into the lover's eyes, illuminated metaphor of capturing Luna's orb into the pupil of the lover's eyes, dilated with lust. Between Dawn and the Midnight Moon, lovers move according to their cosmic orientation, united sensuously, heaven, earth, mind, body, and spirit in balance...a poem to be read in the most holistic way by New Age lovers, double-peaking in climax, ethereal to two kindred spirits who feast on passion Between Dawn and the Midnight Moon...it's very good to see you posting again, Taylor...be well...Blessed Be.
Hey to Taylor - The quality is never surprising... only the suddenness of your work... after absence. If this poem is not perfection, please don't say it, for it says it all.
- Bill
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It is a blessing to see the sunrise and the moon at the same time. I love the way the sun paints the hues of indigo as it rises, bringing a new day, and with it the singing of birds. I'm glad you are one of us who take the time to notice such things.
Walt
Where have you been all my life? I've read three of your poems, and I am utterly amazed by the power, the imagery of your words. Thank you: tracking you. That was I don't miss any more!! This, no exception: marvelous lines with an ethereal quality of dream. Yes. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Chris
Richard ...
hugs, Myrna
Stirring stuff Taylor, that is both enchanting and captivating to behold.
One Love
Peter
Beautifully composed to enchant and inspire... A poetic banquet artistically served in "Between Dawn and the Midnight Moon".
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
good to read you.
Thanks for sharing!!
Love Tinka
Love,
Eileen
Be safe,
Karen
Your friend,
~Butch Howard
Your Eternal Friend,
Sage
- Bill