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When It Implodes!
by E T Waldron → (All Poetry by E T Waldron)
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Two moths could have been dancing to a waltz by Strauss,
with every sway~ their  color irridescent  Gray
mixed with torquoise ~offered a fascinating choice~

My thoughts turned all fanciful hoping with romance
I'd soon be filled,being in love with the thought of love
and having none of its side effects~except what dreams reflect~

The sun was getting ready to make its wondrous beauty known 
as it set~and before it said goodnight, it's flame and  yellow light~ streaked through the heavens like a rocket in flight~

I needed arms to surround me, kisses to ignite me~
carresses to excite me~poetic love words whispered in my ear
magic touches that bring me ever near
to let your body implode mine with a climax most divine~

What better way to match the beauty of the  sky
as the sun says goodbye and the moon says hello
with its gorgeous starglow~ and I know
nothing can ever be this good until it is understood,
that  the gift of God's creation is the beauty in our relations!~

~etw~




 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "When It Implodes!"
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on April 12, 2012
Marvelous indeed, but if I may be allowed to be a crooner, there is something special about a nooner;-) Patrick

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 10, 2012
beautiful!

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on April 7, 2012
YES...I BELIEVE THIS. RELATIONSHIPS REFLECT THE BEAUTY OF 'HIS' CREATIIONS...ESPECIALLY, THAT SO VERY 'SPECIAL'...RELATIONSHIP. WELL DONE, EILEEN AND THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on April 5, 2012
nicely done, eileen.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 5, 2012
passionate, wondrous, eloquent and inspired ...

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 4, 2012
Yes indeedy, our earthly orgiastic experiences are a physical picture of the spiritual sublime, I think, Eileen.. and vice versa. The two are but one, especially when all the elements of our being are forged together in that sense of climax. I love the way you have thought about the shape of your poem here; it really does look like an explosion on the page! :)) Moths are such a good illustration of this, flying into the burn as they do. xx

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 4, 2012
It's so good to see you back in your wondrous writing style!

Ron

Reviewed on April 3, 2012
well said!

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on April 3, 2012
When it comes down to it, human relations are all we really have.

~W~

Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2012
I love how you can paint a picture with your words, Eileen ... Beautifully written!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on April 3, 2012
Lovely poetry ET, as always you romance our hearts with your beautiful words.

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on April 3, 2012
Romance reigns eternal in your precious heart, Eileen Truly a gift from our Creator

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on April 3, 2012
I love everything about this poem,my friend. You have cast upon the poetical waters a magnificent and wonderful mental picture. You are good at that, but this is one of your better ones.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 3, 2012
I not only love the last line, I love the whole thing, as I do whatever you write...e

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 3, 2012
Eileen, this picture you paint is an exploding skyrocket ride through the senses and emotions of love and inspiration that captured me and held me close -- a delightful poem my dear friend -- I wish you love and peace -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 3, 2012
Quite a vision here before us, Eileen,
the romantic leading us through a galaxy
of light,hope,love and beauty

john

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 3, 2012
Quite a poem Sis, and I love the last line.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 2, 2012
beautiful passion, delicately expressed upon natures wonder of relations - spring fever?

Reviewed on April 2, 2012
When I came to the end of this poem I almost exploded like a meteor. God Bless You Queen. Have missed you soooooooooooo much.


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