Two moths could have been dancing to a waltz by Strauss,
with every sway~ their color irridescent Gray
mixed with torquoise ~offered a fascinating choice~
My thoughts turned all fanciful hoping with romance
I'd soon be filled,being in love with the thought of love
and having none of its side effects~except what dreams reflect~
The sun was getting ready to make its wondrous beauty known
as it set~and before it said goodnight, it's flame and yellow light~ streaked through the heavens like a rocket in flight~
I needed arms to surround me, kisses to ignite me~
carresses to excite me~poetic love words whispered in my ear
magic touches that bring me ever near
to let your body implode mine with a climax most divine~
What better way to match the beauty of the sky
as the sun says goodbye and the moon says hello
with its gorgeous starglow~ and I know
nothing can ever be this good until it is understood,
that the gift of God's creation is the beauty in our relations!~
YES...I BELIEVE THIS. RELATIONSHIPS REFLECT THE BEAUTY OF 'HIS' CREATIIONS...ESPECIALLY, THAT SO VERY 'SPECIAL'...RELATIONSHIP. WELL DONE, EILEEN AND THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Yes indeedy, our earthly orgiastic experiences are a physical picture of the spiritual sublime, I think, Eileen.. and vice versa. The two are but one, especially when all the elements of our being are forged together in that sense of climax. I love the way you have thought about the shape of your poem here; it really does look like an explosion on the page! :)) Moths are such a good illustration of this, flying into the burn as they do. xx
I love everything about this poem,my friend. You have cast upon the poetical waters a magnificent and wonderful mental picture. You are good at that, but this is one of your better ones.
Eileen, this picture you paint is an exploding skyrocket ride through the senses and emotions of love and inspiration that captured me and held me close -- a delightful poem my dear friend -- I wish you love and peace -- Jon Michael
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
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Peace, love and light,
Amber
the romantic leading us through a galaxy
of light,hope,love and beauty
john