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I've Been There
by George E Thompson → (All Poetry by George E Thompson)
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The power of the ocean is mind boggling and makes me realize just how small I really am in comparison. get


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Nighttime.
Alone in the darkenss
At the beach house.
I walk to the water’s edge
And feel the cool breeze soothing my skin
Lights flicker on the horizon as a big ship
Glides north.
Waves lop the beach and I cannot see
Them.
They are hidden entities that crash head first
Onto the sand.
I feel the wet sand between my toes
And roll up each pant leg and
Move slowly into the water and stop.
There is darkness behind and in front of me
I cannot tell where the land gets wet and the
Ocean wraps its scarf around the darkness.
The only sounds are my breathing and the waves
As they tumble and trample the ground.
The sky above is ink jet black
Patterned with a star here and there and
The crescent moon.
I shiver in the darkness and realize how small I am
The ship on the horizon looks like it’s a half inch tall
And I feel very small when the stillness is broken
With each new wave hitting the shore.
I cry tears that sting my eyes and streak my face
I’m alone.  Me.  Darkness.  Water and sand.
Melding together.  Melting into the earth as just
One small particle of a greater piece.
Peaceful.  Serene.  I’ve been there.
Small, inconsequential.  I fade into the darkness
Of fulfillment.  Alone.  Naked.  Wiser.


(c) 2007 George E Thompson


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 Reviews of "I've Been There"
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 26, 2007
Beautiful George as I felt myself drift into your words in the dark, quite, peaseful night alone. As I gaze I look at the stars and a memory comes to mind, with each bringing a tear to my eyes. Thank you for taking me away.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on July 26, 2007
Significant and insignificant at the same time. That's what I felt through your words. Emotionally moving and touched. excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
George, how have I missed your writings...this is truly inspirational and full of your experience walking the beach. It's amazing how our ego's can be nil as we compare ourselves with the ocean. You've captured an exceptional painting here...one that a viewer could stand for hours looking at. I truly enjoyed this a lot!

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Great ideas. We are but mere fragments in a huge universe but still think we are in the driving seat. Victor

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
"They are hidden entities that crash head first
Onto the sand..."...this line opened a wave of thoughts!
great insight on the edges of perspectives...
Enjoyed!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Oh! and P.S. "Sudden Time..." was just me spending time, musing! :)
Thanks for the visit!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Just beautiful,Hugssssssss

Reviewed by Angel God is Love
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
This write makes me think of how we as human beings are not the center of attention we are like pebbles of sand on the ocean.
This write makes one get under their ego and pride and really think... About the Whole ocean the ocean being God on going and no ending.
Thanks for this.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
George, this is a wonderful write...you've captured a reality of life, naked we enter this world, naked we leave.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
Oh this is fantastic...I could smell the ocean and feel the sand under my feet washes away by eb & flow as waves brush shoulder with great force!!

Been there many a times!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
Splendid reflections and wonderful mood setting imagery. I luv this poem George!

Eileen

Reviewed by Barbara Mercer
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
I love this and all the sensations you evoke, a lucky man to have a beach house and feel the richness of the ocean George, waves of love }}}}}}}}} Barbara

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
Very smooth. This is one of your best. Loved it.


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