this is a raw work and with earnest honesty. pure emotion and some understanding. it is hard to balance emotions with knowledge at times. reminds me of my own daughter. be blessed and keep the pen to the paper.
This is so pure and honest that it touches the heart at once. It captures all the insecurities of youth...both the writers and her subjects and gives an eye back into our own youth when things our minds were not so cynical. Your daughter has a talent like her mother and I hope to see more of her work in the future.
Rose
always,
randy
Peace,
Dan
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