refreshing new read/write. thanks a lot for this display of your creativity.

When I feel similar to this, I stew for awhile, then finally I think about going to the Lord with my down feelings. A remedy is found in opening my Bible. I simply needed to look to God for help.
I learned a long time ago to praise Him when things are going wrong.
Like in the first chapter of the book of James, we can "count it all joy" when we have trials because the testing of our faith brings patience and other blessings.
Try it---you'll like it!

are you a genie? if i let you out do i get three wishes? ;)

seriously, a feeling we all experience occasionally ... well written ... universally themed ...

A view of one being held down or being held back...and asking for another or someone to helpto lead one out of the bottle...

nice work on this poem...

enjoyed.....Art Sun...

Wow, I think I'm feeling the cork's about to blow - all by itself! Wonderful poem.
Mo

A feeling that we've all felt, and if not we will. You've penned it well my friend, great write!
Blessings,
Joyce B...

Crissy,

A most common feeling when one doesn't even want himself for a friend. Well done.

Sincere and painfully revealing. "My thoughts are dumb"- I think when being trapped there is nothing to do but look inside, which is hardly ever an appealing venture. Ambrose Bierce defined "alone" as "in bad company". Good write.

Brett

Yes Crissy, I have felt like that on occasion. Sometimes it is better to feel pain than to feel completely numb and lifeless. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

drowning in pure lonliness is no fun at all, can drink yourself to oblivion and end up begging for help...and if no one is listening by now, your screwed!
I love the double talk with this write...so many ways to look at it!
Andy, your a hoot!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

HAHAHA, KEEP BEGGING, I'll take off the cork and if you insist........lololol

fun fun fun

You hit the nail on the head with this write,So many of us are suffering from lonliness and depression,I feel like this many day's
alone and wondering about my future,Stay positive and keep smiling ,all we can do until love comes our way are good friendships,
Great write Crissy,
Michael

Unique and origianal capture of a topic that is both real and painful and one that almost everyone has felt at one time in their lifes or another. Great work Crissy.

Felix L. Perry

Yeah, I felt this way many a time. Great poem.