Sometimes you can look into the eyes of a child and see the Lord.
My little piece of heaven, what I wouldn't give
To keep you both so tiny, so you don't have to live
For the world out there is frightful, and many times so cold
I won't always be there when you want someone to hold
The day will come for you to stand up on your own
My only prayer is I've guided you enough so you'll never be alone
But if the day comes you feel that you just can't make it so
Just think of me and remember that you have a place to go
Just don't grow up to quickly, for my heart may just sink
God won't miss two Angels who came to visit one day you think?
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Reviews of "Two Angels came"
Reviewed by Cynthia Heath (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2010
I love love love this one!
Reviewed by Jessica Lark (Reader)
Reviewed on April 27, 2007
Hi Crissy,
As a mother of two, this poem echoes my own thoughts. I am always telling them not to grow up too fast and wish away their childhood. Unfortunately as every parent knows, they are far too eager to do just that.
A touching and heartfelt poem.
Wishing you well,
Jessica.
Oh I truly agreed children are a piece of heaven
And I think you are right sometimes
you do see the Lord.
And I always wish they could stay
children for ever but you know is imposable!!
Excellent Imagery and flow
Outstanding piece!!
Love And Peace to You Always
Your Friend...Morning Star
A Mothers Love shines BRight here!
Great feelings throughout! Chrissy!
They are Adorable!
I know the passions we feel to be their Protector! 24-7
YOur heart will guide them- A mothers instincts and bond with her
children (Angels)
WArmly,Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
Awwwww, I used to tell Sebastian my son to stop growing and getting older.."I can't help it daddy" oh how I understand your maternal angst...
But no fears, when a mum prayers like this, God will never foresake them, or you....
This is precious and you have touched the very meaning of being a loving parent. We do look at our children and wish and pray to protect them always and yes if we could keep them young forever we would.
A beautiful write Crissy, enjoyed this so much, reminded me of myself when my two children were younger..I did hate to see them grow up and have to find their own place in this big scarey world. Now my two angels are twenty seven and twenty two with an angel each of their own, one two the other four. Time has a way of getting away from us...it passes quickly...enjoy, cherish, and savor every moment. But, light note on this review is I have found that when trouble comes, both of my children still come to their mom for comfort and support, just as I go to my mother and I am forty three, but the eternal peace from life is our Heavenly Father...wonderful warm and heartfelt write dear friend.
Blessings from the mountains of Kentucky,
Joyce Bowling
Mary Angela Nangini's poems celebrate the richness of life and love. From the city to cottage-country and the roads in between, Nangini explores the changing seasons of her varied region. (This book will soon be reprinted in hard cover.)
As a mother of two, this poem echoes my own thoughts. I am always telling them not to grow up too fast and wish away their childhood. Unfortunately as every parent knows, they are far too eager to do just that.
A touching and heartfelt poem.
Wishing you well,
Jessica.
Beautifully written.
And I think you are right sometimes
you do see the Lord.
And I always wish they could stay
children for ever but you know is imposable!!
Excellent Imagery and flow
Outstanding piece!!
Love And Peace to You Always
Your Friend...Morning Star
Great feelings throughout! Chrissy!
They are Adorable!
I know the passions we feel to be their Protector! 24-7
YOur heart will guide them- A mothers instincts and bond with her
children (Angels)
WArmly,Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
Be safe,
Karen
Hugs, Laura
Brett
But no fears, when a mum prayers like this, God will never foresake them, or you....
Fee
Blessings from the mountains of Kentucky,
Joyce Bowling