love is cool
it some times make
you look like a fool
you do everything
right and in return
you get love bite
wen your in love
you some times dont
see right you
might tend
to fight thats all
right it fades into
the nite until it gets
brite, so a
suggestion if
i mite, say your wrong
even though
your right just to
provent a next fight
love deals
exactly with your
heart so it leaves scars that eventually mend
until the end
It is always an indeed pleasure to read such splendid real work such as this one. This is well written and adqaute in everyway. Thanks for sharing this with us all here on the Den.
A people’s heart can be found in their poetic words. In history men and women have stood firmly upon their soapboxes and street corners, rallying the deepest beliefs of people to rise up and be heard. The poetrypages.com has offered that voice a new
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
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love the picture it gives the feeling of being unsure
you convey emotion well
enjoyed!!!