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Severe Admonition
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Categorized in Poetry, but, methinks, is should be, perhaps, in Parenting, or Education and Training?

 

I flirted with ten maidens, of every hue and texture,

Diane was covered with boys, seducing them all asunder.

When suddenly we heard Zeus, forewarning in his voice:

“People”, he roared quite sternly, “People are not just toys!”

 

“If you continue your games, my dear Diana and Ares,

they might awaken and think, no matter how inanely,

that they haven’t been dreaming; nor having an illusion.

It could drive them quite crazy, from the resulting confusion.”

 

“So you must both remember, that humans are just people.

They cannot make dreams real; not in their physical body.

You must learn when to stop—and to control your guile.

So… well, you may play with them, but… only for a while!”

 

 

 

  

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 Reviews of "Severe Admonition"
Reviewed by Linda Zebsokey
Reviewed on April 21, 2009
So… well, you may play with them, but… only for a while!”Sometimes it seems the "gods" are busy creating havoc in our lives, so it's good for know it's "only for a while!" Creative and witty poem.



Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on April 9, 2009
Stan,
Enjoyed this poem!

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 7, 2009
A perfect piece for education as the lessons are well explained and learned...

Be always safe,
Karen


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