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Hometown
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Years later, you visit the town
of your childhood and find
the fields and woods are
parking lots and streets. Your hide-
and-seek pasture has become
a trailer park. A turnpike splits
your old neighborhood. All afternoon
you prowl the sidewalks for one
remembered face. Nobody you know
passes you. The human race
has forgotten World War II
and the Great Depression. Strangers
crowd the boulevards, and the fumes
from engines dirty the snow. Even
the oaks in the square have been pulled
from the earth - they've been replaced
with boxes of plastic geraniums.
Tenements rise like fungi
along the hillside. You soon
get lost. Not one person stops
when you ask directions. At dusk,
a cop on his beat becomes
suspicious. He shakes you down.
Your only alibi: you've come to see
your hometown. But the cop
is young and inexperienced. he has
no use for aliens and old men
who lie. You keep telling him
how the world was once. He shakes his head,
probes you with his stick. He tells you
to get out of his town and to be quick.


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 Reviews of "Hometown"
Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on January 9, 2005
Isn't THAT the truth? I just took a trip down memory lane when I visited my old home in Indiana. What I carried away from that visit felt much like what you describe. Especially after going thru the checkpoints at the airports to and from. Probed, poked, and abused! Terrific job CJ. Michelle

Reviewed by Anniemoh Ohio
Reviewed on August 6, 2004
It's amazing how drastically things change. Great write.

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on August 6, 2004
I still live in my hometown. And I've taken note of how it has changed over the years. Places which held some of my fondest memories are now the parking lots and shopping centers you speak of. There is now a bank, a Hardee's, a Wings Ole, and an Office Depot where my elementary school used to be. Sometimes I can't bear to look at those places when I drive past.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on August 5, 2004
loved this.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 5, 2004
Poetic truth. So much of this is a sad commentary on cotemporary life. Enjoyed.


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